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If At First You Don't Succeed (2014)

by K.C. Faelan(Favorite Author)

3.74 of 5 Votes: 1

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English

genre

Romance

publisher

M/M Romance Group @ Goodreads

review 1: Ohhh ohhh ohhh, my poor preggie belly is still in a spasm fit from laughing so much :) At one point I was thinking.... no .... nooooo no no on no .... why is this happening to these poor boys.its sooo funny and then no ... I feel bad for laughing at them... and then this... “It’s not funny. How would you like if your balls fled in fear? My balls haven’t been this frightened since I dove into the icy water at the Polar Bear Plunge my first year of high school.”You have to read it... please ... just do it and KC this will make a great prologue to their own book hint hint ... I see lots of domestic discipline in their future :)
review 2: Cute, some definite funny parts and story potential. The writer did a wonderful job taking the prompt and running with i... moret, making the prompt her own. Some of the passages seemed to drag somewhat, go on too long, get lost in the details. It was funny, it was interesting, I think it would be fun to see more of the characters, the end of the chastity device, their relationship with Garret, but maybe try to edit down the sex scenes, make them more concise and clear and fun. less

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