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One Love, One Mistake (2013)

by Kelly McGrath(Favorite Author)

3.14 of 5 Votes: 2

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

M/M Romance Group @ goodreads

review 1: Two stars for the story, added another for the donation of time and effort by the author. It had definite potential, but I hate the evil woman trying to turn the gay man straight trope, and how she went about it was horrible. I also felt it was a bit rushed, but it was a good try for a first time author. I did like both characters, and the writing itself was pretty solid, the author just needs to work on slowing things down, and not villainizing the women.
review 2: I feel bad giving 1 star to a free read, but this story really did not work for me.The plot sounded good, but was misleading. The story was far to rushed, and the cliché female bitch was poorly handled.The dialogue sounded wooden, nothing really flowed, instead it felt stilted and we were giving ex... moreplanations of everything, instead of seeing it ourselves.This actually felt more like an outline, kinda like the idea before it gets fleshed out into a story.I really appreciate the work these authors put into these free reads, but I’m afraid I really didn’t enjoy this one. Sorry. less

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