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The Billionaire's Daughter (Part 1): Breaking Free (2000)

by Mara Stone(Favorite Author)

3.38 of 5 Votes: 3

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English

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Romance

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The Billionaire's Daughter

review 1: Ok, maybe it is just me. I understand the concept behind a short story and continuing on with a series. However, I don't feel the characters were strongly developed. Lets face it, for those of us that read the erotica, we want the best of both worlds. We want a strong story with compelling characters as well as one hell of a steamy sex scene. There was a sex scene here, but I thought it was lacking alot of potential. I think this could have been a wonderful short story had the author fleshed out her story better. Just my opinion.
review 2: This was a short read - part of a series of novellas. And it was...okay. For this length of novella, I didn't expect the content of a novel, but I felt that it didn't impress in any one particular area. For example,... more the characters weren't extremely well-developed, but neither were the sex scenes (or should I say "scene?") I think that either one lacking may have been more acceptable if the other had been delivered more powerfully. With that being said, I felt the story was just lacking in a few too many areas to give too much attention to. less

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