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Rite Of First Claim (2012)

by Qwillia Rain(Favorite Author)
4.06 of 5 Votes: 2
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Downtime Press
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Diablo Blanco Club
review 1: From the first few pages I knew I wasn't going to like Lyssa, the heroine. She loves Mike, but believes he will never stay with her because she is older and has curves. Mike has been chasing after Lyssa for years. Now she wants a baby so she goes to a kinky club with doctored condoms in hopes of getting pregnant. She didn't want en vitro because it was too clinical, but getting knocked up by a total stranger is so much better. This reasoning irritated me.Mike is a Dom, Lyssa knows this. Her sister is happily married to a Dom. Yet Lyssa makes derogatory remarks about the lifestyle.I felt sorry for Mike, lusting and loving a woman who had such a low opinion of herself that she wasn't allowing herself or Mike any happiness.But I still like the cover, very ... moresexy!
review 2: Every year for the past foru years Lyssa has received an invitation to the Diablo Blanco Club Midnight Masquerade party. This year she finally decides to accept with a plan to get an unknown donor and conceive a baby. She has her eyes set on a perfect candidate, hoping that her ex doesn't find out what she has done. When ex-flame Mike Halsey to walk in the door and claim her as his own, everything goes awry.Mike has been waiting four years to get a chance to win Lyssa back, when he receives a call that she is at the club and on the prowl he evokes the Rite of First Claim which gives him thirty days as her dom to show her how perfectly they are together. Lyssa does not want Mike though, he broke her once and she has no intention on going down that road again, but Mike is playing for keeps whether Lyssa agrees or not.Excellent story, full of spice and seduction. I had read this once before, but reread and am still as entertained as if reading for the first time. less
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Sharel
Yup I Love a man who wants to knock up his lady gets me EVERY TIME!!!
Mercury55
A good story line - but lost the point as the story progressed.
Jess3999
Was just a little lacking in the ending I thought.
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