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Becoming His Slave (2012)

by Talon P.S.(Favorite Author)

4.5 of 5 Votes: 3

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

Talon P.S.

series

Dominion of Brothers

review 1: FTC Disclaimer: This book was provided by the Tour Host in exchange for an honest review of the book. NO monetary compensation for this review or time has been provided. The opinions expressed in our reviews are our own.I have mixed feelings about this book. We’ll start with the good:I liked this book for the relationship, the sex and the explanation of a 24/7 life slave to the reader. For those of you who don’t know, a life slave is almost like a life-sized Barbie in some respects: The Dom/Domme dresses, feeds and fully takes care of their slave. They brush their hair, teeth, watch over them and care for them. And that works for some people. I have seen it in real life. The effort and depth of how Talon PS and Princess SO (Talon’s twin & writing partner) put in... moreto the character of Katianna, who is a fantastic person but not the strong, independent type that is featured so often today in real life and its mirroring literature, was amazing. I loved how they didn’t make her seem weak or waify… in other words, unlikable. You want to take care of her along with Trenton.You also want to give in to Trenton… The quote I added above I loved because what straight woman doesn’t want a big, muscular giant to gently brush her hair? For a woman, getting your hair brushed by someone else is amazing. We will purr. (Guys, take note. Girls, let your guys know. Amazing bonding and just -purrs-)…. ahem.However, on the flip side of all the good, I have a few criticisms.I liked it, but at times, it seemed overly verbose. There were plot bits that seemed like they would go somewhere and then didn’t… This isn’t to say that they had to, but when you involve a terrible accident scene that was sparked by a serial killer, you’d think that you’d read more about said serial killer later on… And there is the fact that much editing went into this book, however there were still mistakes that slipped through.They also used some words that had me quoting Inigo Montoya from “The Princess Bride” — “You keep using that word. I don’t think it means what you think it means.” I.E. words that a thesaurus would give you in terms of female genitalia or the vagina, yet when you look up the actual definition, you kind of cringe. ”Theca” and “Chrysalis” being two of them…I’m going to round this out with more things I liked about the book because I really did enjoy it, though I think there should be a bit more professional editing…. however, I found words that I had to look up (Preponderant) and the use of Latin titles for the main Doms of the book (Dominus, Patronus, etc). It gives is a deliciously gladiator feel, and you shiver (and if you’ve ever seen “Spartacus: Blood & Sand”, you’ll understand further). I love that the reader is buying multiple stories all within one book — you don’t get just one story line. You get many. So it’s worth reading and enjoying. Be it an investment for fantasies and future nights, or just a guilty pleasure.One Last Quote:“It is very possible for a Master to love his slave and still be the Dom in the relationship, but if it is lost — it should not matter. What’s more important? Being the authority or being truly happy with someone?”
review 2: I was quite looking forward to reading this one. Lots of rave reviews and a nice long book to counteract the plethora of novellas that seem to have come my way recently.I must admit I struggled through the first 25% of the book. It picked up for me about 40% in, but then again I struggled to finish.I kept getting distracted by the homophone errors that were consistently present throughout the book...fiend/feignedbrake/breakpassed/pastseem/seamshuttered/shudderedprocured/produced (not exactly homophones, but rather incorrect word choice)And then there were words thrown in like "cachinnation" that even though I knew the meaning just seemed out of place and jarring.I must admit I found these errors/choices distracting and it may have contributed to my lack of connection to the story. I never felt pulled into the action. I felt a lot of telling rather than showing. less

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