review 1: 3.5 starsAn interesting and entertaining read about a twin (Clark) having feeling for his brothers best friend (Evan) but they seemingly can't stand each other. It appears that Evan has been harassing Clark for the past 15 years (in really inventive ways) and now Clark can't trust the guy and wants nothing to do with him, despite his attraction. I like that Evan did what he could to get Clark's attention, to stay memorable in some way, but I couldn't help but feel that he was way more invested in a relationship than Clark was. Once they came together, I didn't feel that there was a lot of affection from Clark and I wondered where their dynamic was going to go. The story is told from Clark's POV but I was more invested in Evan - I thought he was a great character. Interesti... moreng futuristic concept (Mars colonies) and I enjoyed the build up to Clark finally realizing Evan's intentions. A great addition to the loves landscapes event. My thanks to the author for their time and participation. review 2: 3.25 starsThis was good and I wanted to like it more than I did because space, aliens, Mars. . . However there were the odd clunky exposition points, and somehow, despite being a short story, it felt like it dragged a bit in places and was too long/slow. Also I'd have enjoyed a bit more of the actual couple time interaction. All of that said this is a new author so definitely one to watch. less
