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Completing Him (2013)

by C. Shell(Favorite Author)

3.8 of 5 Votes: 2

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

C. Shell

series

Harlow Trilogy

review 1: I happend to come across this series by accident but OMG I'm so glad that I did. I loved the story of Alex and Jessica. I couldn't wait to read this one. Loved the Alpha male in Alex (I mean what's not to love about a sexy alpha male!) and how Jessica just couldn't turn away from the sexy beast. There were twist and turns and when you thought you had it figured out Wham! It turns out to be completly different! The only thing that I can say that I don't like is the fact that this series has come to an end. Great job!
review 2: Can't help but be a bit harsh here....the editing/grammatical errors of the first two novels CONTINUE in the third, and after so many reviews made mention of them previously, really disappointed author didn't take the time to listen t... moreo them. This might be the worst third novel in a trilogy I have ever read. It was short, so needed to tie up a lot of loose ends in a prompt manner, but it did so without logic. What I felt when reading was that this author excels at writing sex scenes, she really kept me throughout the series with her writing there, but in between all of those scenes is a very poorly written storyline and plot that is not held together well at all. Examples: new bodyguards introduced into the story (names, sit down for dinner with them, anticipating as supporting cast as such), barely mentioned after that; trip to amusement park - nothing was ever described; attacker - caught (no response from Alex despite his anger prior); just very very underdeveloped details. I think the author has good concepts, just needs some mentoring on making the most of them. Beta readers are your friend! :-) less

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