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Tit For Tat (2000)

by Delilah Fawkes(Favorite Author)
2.93 of 5 Votes: 5
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review 1: Interest: SynopsisTitle Thoughts: It fits extremely well.Cover Thoughts: I love it! It's definitely an attention grabber and fits this short story well.WARNINGS: The synopsis tells you.If this is a taste of what Fawkes can do, I can not wait to read her other short stories and a full fledged novel when she writes one. I like that it's set in college and will probably go hunt down more books set while the character is at college. I haven't read but a few and would love to read more.Fawkes caught my attention from the first few sentences and she held it through out. I liked that Sara was going out on a limb than what she would normally do. Every now and then, I try to do something I wouldn't normally do, although it's not sex related. I thought it was interesting how they we... morere best friends and after this, looked at each other differently. With the ending, I'm hoping there will be more.Addict's Last Words: Tit for Tat is a teasing taste of what is to come from Fawkes.To Buy or To Borrow: I enjoyed it so it's worth a buy from me.
review 2: A foursome, two guys and two girls, head into a room and prompt each other to get busy on their partners. If you two do this, we'll do that. Great title, good story premise. The sex scene writing is handled skillfully and readers looking for something quick will find this a dirty little read. The alluring cover art suggests it might be more about FF than MM but without spoiling the story it's more evenly split.On the critical side, I found myself hoping there would be a little more character and story setup. Perhaps another 20-30% words on the setup. I was somewhat surprised when at 49% the story was over. I knew it was a short story going in so not whining about story length (the author also advertises the number of words in the description which is great, thank you) but the fact that the book contains 51% excerpts/teasers for her other books and only 49% story was different (not necessarily in a bad way, keep reading). On the plus side, the excerpts for the other books by the author are also erotica and look interesting, so readers aren't just getting ads, they're getting additional content.Formatting: I wish there would have been indents or spaces for new sentences in the Kindle version as everything was left aligned. I've come across a few other books like this and this throws me out of the story too much. The editing, however, was great. I didn't spot any typos, misspelled words or other grammar issues.In summary, I give the formatting 2 stars (if indents on new paragraphs are added this is easily upgraded, making the overall 4 stars), story 3 stars and the writing 4 stars. For those who are looking for a fast, spicy read, Tit for Tat is worth checking out. less
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sallyb
My kick off read for #doinitdirty 2.0 quick but fun.
Kathy
For being a short story I give this a Meh.
megha
Hot, short f/f & m/m story.
Ashok
I want mooooore!!!
apple
HOT foursome
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