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Welcome To Hell (2014)

by Demelza Carlton(Favorite Author)

3.69 of 5 Votes: 1

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

Lost Plot Press

series

Mel Goes to Hell

review 1: This is the short story which begins Demelza Carton's 'Mel Goes to Hell' series, and I have to say, it's a thoroughly enjoyable and wild ride.Ms Carlton has taken the angels and demons of mythology and transplanted them smack bang into the middle of the corporate world. where Lucifer himself is making takeover bid for the world.It's up to Melody Angel, a temp worker, to infiltrate HELL (Offices of Health, Environment, Life and Lands Corporation) and investigate what is going on.This story pokes fun at the corporate world with nearly every word. The characters are entertaining, and the premise is certainly unique. A highly recommended read and an enjoyable entree to Ms Carlton's series. This short story is free, and gives you a taste of Ms. Carton's unique writing s... moretyle.
review 2: Though the writing is well done, the dialogue is not boring, and the story line is humorous I gave this three stars because it is not a complete story, novel, or book. When a book or story is offered on Amazon for review the author should expect to get less stars if the story has no ending. The only reason it got three stars is because this snippet is well done, the dialogue is not boring, and the story line is humorous.The premise reminded me of C.S. Lewis's Screwtape Letters. Only in -Welcome to Hell - Satan (Lucifer) is alive and well on planet earth and running a giant corporation instead of in Hell sending missives to his demonic minions. That a corporation is taking over the control of natural resources is enough to make a person want to read this story, even a better read when Satan is at large and in charge. From reading the other reviews it seems that there will be more coming. I hope so. This is a fun premise and may be a great novel, some day.I love the character of Mel. She's funny and sharp and the writing suggests she has a good back story with the turmoil in Iran and Russia, certainly places that need angelic intervention.I would love to re-review this when the story is complete. less

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