review 1: This book was.......okayish.Muffin was so rude to the point that it made me laugh sometimes but I didn't understand WHY he acted so childish or WHY he liked getting a rise out of people. I would have liked to see the agreeable Muffin more, and I also would have liked to understand what the fuck was really going for most of the story but I guess waiting until was a part of the writing structure? -shrugs-Muffins freak outs were probably my favorites, though, and the sex was hot. I liked the love interest enough- shit, what was his name?- and I liked how he was strong silent type but I didn't like that he hurt muffin physically sometimes in the beginning....whatever. I LOVED all of Muffin's problems, his nightmares, etcetera. What was that little spark with "Mario"? Who is Da... moreniel? WHAT.I got confused. But it really is a good story....and the sex? HOT HOT HOT. that was my favorite part, honestly.Oh. And Porto :((((((This was an awful review I'm so sorry) review 2: This felt a little bit unfinished. The ending was rushed and there were a lot of unexplained plot points. But Muffin was simply a really cool and relatable character and his scenes with Asher were very intriguing and sexy. It would be a good 4-star-read if the writer had taken some time to rewrite it a little bit. Nevertheless, this is definitely one of the better free fics.Edit: WOW, so there is a sequel ... I take everything back, there is hope after all. :) Four stars, and I am very happy to be able to continue reading about Muffin and Asher. less
