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Almost Broken (2000)

by Portia Moore(Favorite Author)

3.91 of 5 Votes: 7

languge

English

genre

Romance

series

If I Break

review 1: This is my first written review because I felt that I needed to explain my 4-star review. The writing style and plot are amazing - definitely original and emotionally gripping!! But the editing... Aye-ye-ye..... Grammar, punctuation and typographical errors galore - at least 5 on every page!! At some times it was hard to figure out what was being said. I almost feel ripped off and want to ask for my money back because it's almost disrespectful for an author to subject a reader to that level of error. Hell - I'd definitely be open to editing myself if asked! But the story was amazing so I guess I'll forgo the refund request.With that being said, I can NOT wait for the next book. I can only pray that it's run by an editor or two (or three) before it's rele... moreased.
review 2: So I read If I Break yesterday and fell in love, instantly purchased Almost Broken. I must say I was kind of disappointed, I don't think much of anything happened really in this book aside from Chris/Lauren getting to know each other. In the previous book, not only did we have the past but present nicely being revealed as the chapters went along, it worked and ran smoothly.My biggest problem is unfortunately Chris. I'm sorry, I feel sorry for the guy and all of that but gosh is he a pussy. No kind words of saying it. Cal may have been an asshole but he sure as hell wasn't spineless which is what I'd say about Chris. Don't get me wrong, I didn't hate him, he's such a nice guy but he's a dull as dishwater character whereas Cal is so much more fun to read about!Cal, Cal, Cal! Infatuated with him and was waiting for him to make an appearance. The ending was brilliant! Looking forward to reading a book with more of Cal in it again and hoping it'll be a Cal/Lauren ending or as close to it as I can get (won't say more so I don't spoil it). less

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