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If I Break (2000)

by Portia Moore(Favorite Author)

4.39 of 5 Votes: 3

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If I Break

review 1: What in holy hell did I just read? This might be the worst book in the history of books. I can't believe I saw it through (note- it was a free kindle read and I had nothing else to read till I got to the library on a Monday. By the time I got to the library I was like 80% and just finished).Yet another abusive relationship pretending to be romance. What the HELL women of the world? WHY oh WHY are you demanding this crap??Poor writing, poor editing (For fuck's sake, a plural of someone's name DOES NOT REQUIRE AN APOSTROPHE! God damn, improper apostrophe use makes me insane), incredibly lame "plot twist". I can't even get into it or I'll go on a huge long rant. Bad. Just bad.gah. Dreck. Pure, unadulterated dreck.... AND! OH.MY.GAWD.... There's more!! Its a freakin... more' TRILOGY!? You can NOT be serious. OH! And a mini from Cal's perspective? No. Just NO.
review 2: I want to say I am an avid reader, but my biggest pet peeve is spelling and grammar issues in books. This book was free on iBooks so I downloaded it. I was pleasantly surprise, it was a crazy twist and I love it! But I felt like I was editing the book as I was reading it, which kind of took away from the overall story line. I rated it a 4 but I feel like that may be incorrect.4 stars for the cover5 stars for the story2 stars for gramma/spellingWith a little more work this book could have been amazing. less

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