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Silvers Alpha (2011)

by Samantha Bates(Favorite Author)

3.87 of 5 Votes: 5

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

Samantha Bates

series

Silver Series

review 1: The story was interesting and the heroine was actually kick-ass. I got to about 42% of the book and decided I couldn't deal with the spelling mistakes, wrong use of words (the witch had to 'consort' with her coven, I think it was supposed to be consult). Then there were times that a sentence that isn't supposed to be a question just ends with a question mark, making the character sound unsure. In Ben's case, very un-alpha-like. I kinda rolled my eyes for the reason that Lucky ran out on Ben the first night they met. The story has the potential just needs editing.
review 2: I got this ebook while it was free on Amazon for my kindle. One thing that kinda makes my nutty is poor editing in books. There were sentences where I found myself reading it twice and someti... moremes three times because I was not sure if I was mis-reading it, or there really was a few extra words in there that did not belong. There are mis-placed punctuation marks, and semi-colons where there should not be any, commas in odd places at times, and simple typographical errors. And yes, I am giving it 3 stars because I truly did like the storyline. If this were to be edited in its entirety it would be much more enjoyable.Besides the above, as I said, I truly liked the story. I liked Lucky's character a lot because she is a very strong, smart, independent, and hard-working mom of four girls, and finds herself in a position that changes her life and her girls’ lives for the better, I think; though she seems reluctant at first to believe what deep down she feels is true, she eases into it and Ben, her Alpha gives her the time she needs. He is very understanding of that and respects her decisions, as it affects her daughters. I was quite surprised at the ending, to find out who was behind the kidnappings, and human tortures; truly never expected to find out who it was, but I guess you never know... Anyway, I do hope this book gets edited, and revised, and republished, because it really is a great storyline. Once you get past the errors, I think readers will enjoy it too. I did get the 2nd book, so let's see what's next, huh? =) less

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