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Inferno & The Good Girl: (Brothers Of Devils Comfort MC) (2000)

by Brair Lake(Favorite Author)

3.34 of 5 Votes: 2

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review 1: Loved the story. This could have been a five star book had it not been for the endless typos, grammatical errors, punctuation errors and open ended sentences. Seriously? Did anybody check this before publishing? It is so distracting when you're reading. Completely wrong words are used if not missed. You have a great story here but you seriously need a good editor to help you. Please also consider not putting an epilogue in your next book as an epilogue is to further comment and conclude your story, not start your next book. Believe it or not, I look forward to your next book because I believe you're gonna be one helluva a writer.
review 2: Would have loved to give the story 5 stars as I really enjoyed, however there were a few things that just made it drop down... more to 3 1/2 stars for me. Grammar, punctuation, spelling. Sometimes it was really difficult to understand what was happening or who was speaking. Sentences sometimes felt like they were started and forgotten. Clothing changed immediately. At one point Inferno is in a pair of jeans, and then the jeans have magically become leather pants. Baby Blu (cute name!) I was confused on due to word usage. This is Louisiana (or so I was lead to believe) yet she used terminology for UK or Australia (I'm from the states so forgive me I'm not sure which country uses words like "Trolly" and "Lolly" and such). We're told towards the end that she came to live with her father at the age of 14; so, why? Where did she come from? Even some of the guys would use the slang "Mate", that's not something that's often used and whenever I have heard it it's normally from a creep trying to be cool (my ex for instance). Just little things that could have been worked on to really bring the story to the 5 stars for me. I am SERIOUSLY (caps here!) looking forward to the next book; Linc and Cassie. Oh my goodness from the epilogue. I want to beat him so bad. Can't wait to see it in August and all the others after reading the Devils Comfort MC prologue. Each little bit into the characters from the book sparked my interest. less

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