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Beneath Your Wings (2011)

by Cleon Lee(Favorite Author)

3.61 of 5 Votes: 2

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

M/M Romance Group @ Goodreads

review 1: What can I say? It was really adorable. I set aside all of my cynical naggings and just enjoyed the story. The inspiration picture is beautiful (though I have objections because of issues with physiological wing placement and such) and the way it was incorporated into the story, although oblique, did have a certain charm.The writing was a little obvious at times (I'm trying still to find a more formal way of saying "square") but I think it ultimately suited the story.Overall, it was adorable, beautiful, and just filled with that amazing sense of transcendent hope that the cynic in me insists I don't believe in (meh, but I am, after all, a closet romantic, aren't I?). This story certainly brought a smile to my face.
review 2: It was a short, yet entertaining pie... morece on two angels loving each other.It was good yet needs more focus on 1. the consistency of the words being used and 2. proofreading.1. At some point I was hoping there would be no use of words like "fuck" and "cock" as we talk of pure, heavenly creatures. I was hoping for more appropriate words (not that I can suggest as of this time but some words used are just beyond what the theme requires).2. Some words were just wrong. I am sure they were all typos, reason why I said this needs more checking to be done (ex. too instead of to, etc.).Additionally, the story was just predictable. less

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