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Baby On Board (2012)

by Dahlia Rose(Favorite Author)
3.9 of 5 Votes: 2
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Sugar and Spice Press
review 1: Description: When the baby daughter he didn’t know he fathered literally gets left on his doorstep, Major Rafe Steele turns to Ivy, the sexy nurse next door for help. But can he convince his practical neighbor that he’s not the frat boy lothario she thinks he is?The Good: Ms. Rose does a good job of painting Ivy as defensive and insecure without making her too tiresome. She’s defensive because she doesn’t look like the other women on their block, who are always throwing themselves at Rafe; and she’s insecure because she has endometriosis and isn’t sure if she’ll ever be able to have children, which was a refreshing change as far as heroines go. I also really liked seeing Ivy’s day-to-day life as a nurse at Walter Reed, and her best friend/co-worker there wa... mores get-out funny. Rafe’s mother is also a funny and caring gem of a character, and an on-going conflict with another neighbor is wrapped up in a surprising way.The Bad: The overall read suffers from too-long block paragraphs and overly long character speeches. Also, the book could actually be a few chapters shorter as it feels like it’s treading water in a few places. It’s a thin line between day-to-day details and unnecessary content. Lastly, readers who have actually had fertility issues might not appreciate how neatly Ivy’s are dealt with in the end.The Naughty: Steamy. 69. Explicit language.Editing issues: 3 typos. Weird indents on Kindle.Publisher: Sugar and Spice PressLength: 133 pagesFinal Grade: BHappy Reading,Theodora from irbookreviews.com
review 2: Quick fun sexy read. I would have liked a bit more analogy of sorts. The straight forward dialogue made it really easy to breeze through thte book, but there would have been more depth if there were areas where the reader had to read between the lined in a sense. Sometimes the joy of reading comes from being able to decipher characters and plots with out it being right in your face. There were also just a few typos but nothing to ruffle feathers over. The love scenes were great!. I think one my fav aspects of the book was the authors dedication to Veterans, her research about Walter Reed, soldier life, and PTSd showed her respect for the men and women that put their lives on the line everyday and That is something that I love most about her books. less
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spearchucker
quick read, a bit cheasy and had a lot of cliches.... but i remained engaged through the book.. :)
TerelLOVESBooks
cute books... truly cute
doris
3.5 stars
tleighajayne
Sweet
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