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Finding Pride (2014)

by Jill Sanders(Favorite Author)

3.73 of 5 Votes: 4

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

Jill Sanders

series

The Pride

review 1: The original premise of the story intrigued me enough to want to read it. I liked the mystery in the beginning of the tale, the setting of Pride, and the set of characters. However, the grammar and spelling errors were overwhelming. I have read other stories that had similar grammar/spelling mistakes, but since the story flowed well I could look past it. It was not okay to forgive those mistakes in Finding Pride as it seemed like it was skipping too fast through time (or sometimes appeared to do so). The overall structure seemed too choppy. I enjoy reading romance, but I caught myself rolling my eyes at a lot of the characters and events. The romance was unbelievable. (Especially because of the main characters background.)I actually thought Lacey and her brothers may have ... morehad something else they were hiding. I hoped we were going to learn that they were part fae. Lacey was always being compared to a pixie, grandmother had a beautiful talent for painting mermaid (rumor in town was that she was), Lacey has unique abilities to be able to read people very well and can diffuse situations. Todd could always show up when needed. (The day dream she had of a black horse and Todd). Ian's character was just off. Disappointed!
review 2: I loved the story but it was painful to read since there was a lot of spelling mistakes as well as a lot of verbs used in the wrong tense. It is obvious that this book was not sent to proofreading nor was it even reread for correction. For this only will I give it a two stars.I would really appreciate that author and/or editors at least do one reading before putting books on sale. My main tongue isn't even english and I could spot too many mistakes.This is really sad that a good story gets spoiled because it's hard to read. less

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