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Loving Her (2000)

by Kelly Lucille(Favorite Author)
3.85 of 5 Votes: 1
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review 1: I have grown accustomed to a certain level of poor editing in self-published books, but this book was TERRIBLE. I don't think anyone read the book at all before it was published. The name of the heroine is frequently replaced with the name of the heroine from book 1, and vice versa. Incorrect words are used throughout. And there is a lack of periods separately sentences, making it very confusing to read. These and other mistakes are very distracting.It's too bad, because the story has moments of humorous dialogue that would distinguish it from other books in the genre of Shapeshifting romance. I had given it a try because I had enjoyed book 1 despite similar editing (or lack thereof) problems. But between the complete lack of editing and the somewhat skimpy storylin... moree and characterizations, these books aren't going to make my keeper pile. In fact, I almost didn't finish book 2 because of these problems. And it's not very long. The author has talent, but she needs to mature and develop her stories more and take some grammer classes. And get an editor.
review 2: 4.5 StarsThis book was really enjoyable. I like that this author writes things the way she does. She's a great story teller and it's easy to follow along. I love the characters set for this book and was happy to read about Mac and Ben. I felt Cassandra complimented the whole group nicely and I can't wait for the next one.The sex scene's were super sexy and hot and really added fuel to the fun fire of this book! Totally recommend, but read the first one before hand, Keeping Her. You won't be able to follow along as all are reoccurring characters. I just wish these books were longer! less
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neha
Nice follow up to book 1. Loved that Mac and Ben found their mate. Great new series.
Daisy
2.5
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3.5
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