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Whill Of Agora (2012)

by Michael James Ploof(Favorite Author)

3.82 of 5 Votes: 1

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English

genre

Fantasy

publisher

Createspace

series

Whill of Agora

review 1: I couldn't finish. The characters are trite and unrealistic: a nineteen year old who handles mystery and high handed treatment about his past like it's no big deal, and father figure who calls the kid he raised "my friend" and makes no fatherly comments or gestures, the plot is so obvious with a heavy handed hint every chapter about his heritage, elves and dwarves borrowed wholesale from tropes...I wuit a quarter through.
review 2: I like the world this author created, and appreciate the thought that went into the story. That being said, I found it shallow and predictable. I don't really mind predictable, as long as I don't feel like I'm reading a children's story, which I most definitely did during this book. Is this a young adult book? I don't even know, I re... moread it because it was free on my Kindle. The writing, oh, the writing. Lack of contractions in dialogue, repetitive wording, clichés, short sentences, and a truely limited vocabulary. As I do enjoy the world and characters, I will read the rest of the series even if it means I'm constantly editing in my head. less

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