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Billion Dollar Baby 1 (2012)

by Simone Holloway(Favorite Author)

3.03 of 5 Votes: 3

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English

genre

Romance

publisher

Simone Holloway

series

Billion Dollar Baby

review 1: Alright... Well... And that's about as long as the book is. Or chapter should I say. I thought I got the wrong one because it was so short, but it turns out this book is being sold chapter by chapter. Don't like that Idea at all. Just finish the book. No one wants to read a book chapter by chapter, then have to PAY for each of those chapters. Just sell the book, you'll get better results.After that being said, the story intrigued me. I was interested in the story of a Billionaire wanting a baby for all the things tied into the clause (the reason this scored a two star instead of one) However, there were MANY mistakes in grammar. And the overuse of the word vagina. I mean I'm not a prude or anything, but how many times can you really say that word with a straight face. Ther... moree are many, many other references you could use in its place.I felt the connection in the characters was dull, and didn't have a spark to it. I do have to say, this would be a great read, if the author took some time and went back to become a little more involved with what the character and their relationships with each other, the grammar, and STOP WRITING CHAPTER BY CHAPTER! Crazy!
review 2: I read the first book in this series. The book was free, and was only a few pages long. The next 8 books from the reviews I read were also short, and you had to pay for each one. In my opinion, you will spend a lot of money for a lot of short stories that should have been all put into one novel for a fair price. I will NOT be wasting my money! Another thing that made me think twice, is that the billion hired Selene to make and have his baby, the old fashion way. After made love the first time, Selene finds out he has a wife… cheating men has always made me sick! less

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