review 1: Truly bad writing and editing occur in this book. Don't get me wrong, I like a good chick lit novel here and there, but this was about the equivalent of the worst lifetime movie ever made in a book. The plot was very unbelievable as were the character's surprise connections throughout the book. I have to say, the poor editing (or lack thereof) was the most irritating while reading this - but hey, it was free on amazon. review 2: Melissa thinks she's got the world at her feet, but suddenly one shift pulls the rug out from under her. Now she's maneuvering Manhattan while dealing with a cheating and criminal fiance, an unexpected pregnancy, her mother's quickie wedding, and a lot of financial fallout. Along for the ride are her friends, Angie, a washed up, drug... more addicted actress, and Christina, the personal trainer. I wish I could give this book a higher rating because the author shows tremendous promise. But this particular book needs serious advice from an editor (past and present tense in the prose, incorrect capitalization, misspellings, etc.) The blurb doesn't match the details of the actual story, and too many scenes rely on coincidence. The best friends/bad girls are just too cliched to be likeable. less
