review 1: I enjoyed this story quite a bit. It was sweet and well written and I loved the MCs and the family. Granny was a hoot. I really liked that there were people of varying cultures not just the token black person. But I was frustrated with the stereotyped angry big guy and the anxious and flamboyant little guy, especially since none of that came out. It didn't need to be pointed out. I wanted a little more...a little more angst, conflict, what happened with the father, but it was enjoyable and fun to read. p.s. Invisible fences are not OK. review 2: This is a very, very cute short story about two DJs who are madly in love with each other. Eddy is more flamboyant and fights for their rights, while Liam is more quiet but very supportive. There's a touch of angst, ... morea pinch of family drama when they go to Liam's grandmother's birthday, a slight twist, and a very happy ending.If you like sweet romances, if you enjoy humor in your stories and if you're looking for a read that combines both, then you will probably like this free short story. less
