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Secrets Of A Proper Countess (2011)

by Lecia Cornwall(Favorite Author)
3.67 of 5 Votes: 4
ISBN
0062018930 (ISBN13: 9780062018939)
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English
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Avon
series
Secrets
review 1: When considering my reaction to this book, in general, overall, I'd have to say enjoyment was found. At the end of the story, I admit freely I was fascinated by the characters. I found the plot to be readable. The dialogue was believable. The external drama was interesting, and well written. But, there were some issues.From the beginning of the novel, to the end, I found the leading characters in the story to be very much grounded in reality. One of my biggest criticisms of a book forms itself when the people within a story are flat and without life. In Secrets of a Proper Countess, while I have other criticisms, this is not one of such. Both Blackwood and Isobel are given distinct personalities which form themselves very well, and allow for the sense that these two are re... moreal people, with real feelings.However, with compliment comes criticism. Firstly, while the above holds true for the hero and heroine, it does not hold so for the secondary characters. Along with the two antagonists of the book, whose on screen viciousness is only truly depicted at the end of the book, thereby making them seem less of a threat throughout the story, I likewise found the secondary protagonists, Adam and Marianne, to be TSTL. The Too Stupid To Live designation holds more for Marianne, considering her actions and out-of-place reactions to her predicament with Isobel at the story's close made her seem vapid, which drastically contradicted the tone of the story the author was so obviously trying to create. Adam, though, was more of a placeholder character for Blackwood, seeming to play the External Doubt for him in a very awkward and spastic way. The plot of Secrets of a Proper Countess holds as much merit as criticism. The story did fascinate me, however, since the high drama finality of the book was unexpected. Largely, Isobel's struggles throughout the story focuses on her internal conflict in coping with the role she plays in her family, specifically with her in-laws. The danger she courts by dallying with Blackwood plays out more like suspense, rather than true conflict, since it is largely emotionally based. All changes dramatically by the end of the story, the nature of the story transforming from internal to a very hard-hitting external conflict. Which, sadly, didn't lend itself well to the story. This is so because, frankly, the author handled such transformation by not handling it. Instead of threading the transformation throughout the story, providing intrigue with drama and suspense, Cornwall instead decided to slap the reader with this change by giving us an 89 page climax! Yep, that's right. Very, very heavy grit-your-teeth, squint-your-face-because-you're-kept-in-a-constant-state-of-Holy-Shit-What-Now?! is elongated over an absurd amount of time. Starting on page 274, and not ceasing until page 363, the fate of the primary characters are unknown for a ridiculous amount of time. While high-drama is okay for a climax, and almost expected, really, it is not okay when it is used simultaneously for a story's turning point, as well as its closing Final Problem. Big, big no-no for me.Aside from drawing out the drama to an unnecessary degree, Cornwall also disappointed me in another big area; the romance. Fundamentally, I am reading a romance, and with that fundamental reality comes the fact that while I enjoy danger, intrigue and mystery as much as the next reader, I still want my romance. One of my biggest criticisms of this book is the fact that the hero and heroine go from Lusty Pants to Love-Lovey with no emotional framework in between. Frankly, there was so much plot to this book that such rudely shoved itself in between the romantic development Isobel and Blackwood needed in order to make their romance and HEA believable. Such development was so nonexistent that, by the time the couple was proclaiming Love-Lovey-Loveness, I was excessively irritated because it came across as painfully dull, and fake. What's more, the hero considered Isobel to be a traitor and murderer not a few pages prior to deciding that he loved her! Our gallant hero instead claimed it was Adam's fault for making him doubt Isobel!!! (Yes, three exclamation marks were indeed necessary.) So, yeah, big problem, there.So, overall, this book? Yep. Its got issues, big issues. However, at no time was I so disgusted with the story that my hands ever itched to throw it against the nearest wall. Likewise, regardless of the Big No-Nos within, the novel was entirely readable. I did connect with the characters, despite wishing they'd connect more with one another. I did enjoy the plot, despite feeling as though it's conclusion was longer the President Bush's presidential term. And, overall, I did like this book, Big No-Nos aside. But, as with any novel, if it's written well enough, it can endure in spite of itself.
review 2: I've found a new favorite author! I really enjoyed the Cinderella aspect to this book. Isobel is basically a prisoner to her evil mother-in-law and brother-in-law, who dictate every aspect of her life, right down to what she wears. The only reason she cooperates is for the sake of her son, Robin, who they threaten to separate her from if she doesn't behave.I loved the interaction between the hero, Phineas, and Isobel. They first meet at a masquerade ball, and Phineas is besotted. When they meet again in daytime, without their masks, Isobel knows who Phineas is, but he has no idea who she is. She is so plain and quiet, that he looks right over her. His obsession with discovering the identity of his secret lady combined with their masked meetings was thrilling, and I couldn't wait for him to unravel the mystery. The scene where he actually figures it out is my favorite in the whole book. It was tense and delicious and I loved it!I really enjoyed the author's writing. It was smooth and a pleasure to read. I loved this hero and heroine. The hero was a strong alpha, and his jealousy over another man's attention to Isobel was very funny. Isobel was a sympathetic heroine, and I liked her personality.I'm looking forward to reading Evelyn Renshaw's story in the next book! less
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roro
I really liked this book. I think it is very well written especially for debut novel. 4.5
hope
Unable to finish. Unlikeable hero. Weak heroine. Everybody else is a villain.
fullparking
Isobel and Phineas will steal your hearts from the first chapter.
Fambaco
Started 4/9/11 & liking it so far
omarhameed
5/5/14
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