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The Spirit Clearing (2012)

by Mark Tufo(Favorite Author)

3.96 of 5 Votes: 3

ISBN

1480030309 (ISBN13: 9781480030305)

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

Createspace

review 1: My least favorite of Mark Tufo's works. While the characters have that familiarity that makes us feel at home and we've come to enjoy, I always felt like I was waiting for something to happen that never did. Action / Story - wise, it felt like a let down, but character development was the best he's ever done. Seems like he specifically wrote this story so he could flex his development muscles and be in depth in ways he couldn't in other story lines.
review 2: I just can't go on. The author's writing style is so distracting that I can't get into the story or connect with the characters. MANY sentences are strung together with commas instead of a period with transition words or a conjunction. For example: "He slowly pushed his eyelid up, he could see a large w... moreindow that faced the nurse's station a few feet past." It's just completely distracting to me after the hundredth time.Also, the dialogue continues to be questionable. Mike is just opening his eyes after being in a coma. The nurse asks if he's upset about his friends. (How would he know about them?!) And the doctor says, "... you have lost all pigmentation in [your eye]. Is that what is concerning you?" REALLY? How would he know that just coming out of a coma, and what doctor jumps to the cosmetic issues before the physiological or even the emotional?Perhaps I'm being overly critical, but for these reasons I just can't connect with the story.Stopped on pg 30 of 358. less

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