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Undercover Submissive (2012)

by Michelle Hughes(Favorite Author)
3.67 of 5 Votes: 1
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Tears of Crimson Books
review 1: Cayce's twin sister Cait is missing and the police are not working very hard at trying to find her since she's a stripper. Cayce reads her sister's diary and finds her writing about BDSM, and she also finds a business card for millionaire playboy Dylan St. Clair. She poses as her sister when going to meet Dylan, but finally confessing to who she really is - a shy librarian. Dylan agrees to help her find her sister, but Cayce will need to pretend to be in the lifestyle. This was a quick read with some sexy scenes. Too many typos, mis-used words and some not-believeable behaviors earned this book only 3 stars.
review 2: Ok, I'm not exactly sure how to rate this book.I thought the premise was great but it fell short for me on the way it was delivered. The wh
... moreole idea of a woman posing as her twin to find out why she disappeared--very interesting. But, I thought it was all too easy. The book needed to be longer in order to flesh all of those details out.I thought that the characters were good, but once again, I just wanted more. WHY didn't Dylan ever keep subs? Why was he just training them before he met Caycee? I thought we got a lot of Caycee's background but it was Dylan that I was really interested in.Also, for those of you who liked to be warned, there were some pretty glaring editing mistakes that took me out of the story in the beginning of the book. But, as the story went on, things were either better or I was able to overlook them, but I didn't notice anything and the story went a lot faster. So, I thought this book fell a bit off the mark for me. I really liked all aspects of it, but I was really aching for the author to do more with it if you know what I mean.I have never read anything by Michelle Hughes before. I liked her ideas in this book so I will definitely look out for more of her work. less
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shicani9795
Very good quick read, could of been even better if the story would of been stretched out more.
Ash
SPOILER: I was all in until he took on the sister to train at the end. That's just wierd!
erica43211
Hot erotic romance! Similar to 50 Shades. A different look at BDSM relationships.
Polar Bear
An interesting look at an different world of dominants and submissives.
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