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Wielder's Awakening (2012)

by T.B. Christensen(Favorite Author)

3.82 of 5 Votes: 1

ISBN

1466352620 (ISBN13: 9781466352629)

languge

English

genre

Fantasy

publisher

CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform

series

Wielder Trilogy

review 1: The actual story isn't bad, interesting & has potential.The writing & editing are very much lacking. Each sentence looks to have been crafted by itself, there is no flow. This is for both description and dialogue, nothing flows and you have to force yourself to read it. There is also a frequent tendency to repeat information you just read in the next sentence, further breaking the flow and showing a sever lack of editing.
review 2: The story was good, but the writing was terrible. There were a ton of grammatical errors, and the author would repeat himself a lot. The story changed viewpoints between different characters only to describe the same scene again. Most of the time these extra viewpoints did not add anything to the story; there isn't anything wrong ... morewith letting the reader have to figure out what someone else is thinking. Reading the book made me wonder if the author proof read his own book. If he had an editor then that person should be fired.With all of that said, I did enjoy the story as a whole. Some of it was predictable, but not all of it. less

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