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Element, Part 1 (2013)

by C.M. Doporto(Favorite Author)

3.34 of 5 Votes: 1

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

C.M. Doporto

series

The Natalie Vega Saga

review 1: This book was quite simple based: the plot was easy to understand although the story didn't begin to sound 'elemental' until about three pages towards the end. I found that the books main topic was sex, nearly every page was about lust and hope of un-rejection towards there love life.Although the topic of school came up quite often, however the ages of the characters I couldn't quite determine. I'm guessing that all questions will be answered in part 2 even though it might have been a better choice to have a full book rather than two separate ones.The punctuation of this book was fairly average there was a few mistakes so I guess a second editorial over view could be suggested as well as this just a hint words like he-bee-gee-bees does not exist it might've been easier to ... moreuse words that everyone will be able to determine the meaning (I know what it means but some people might not).
review 2: For me, this book started off strong. The whole plot with the pills and being in college. I thought that that wasn't a bad idea, and reading it was OK as well. My problems is how she attacks Natalie's relationship with Ryan. I didn't understand it, I understand the concept of them feeling so connected from the start, but she pushed it too far, I probably rolled my eyes at least ten times a scene...And also, if I may add, I understand with the whole 'no sex til' marriage thing' and if that's your belief, then great. It doesn't mean that you have to add that into your book.I know my review may sound a bit negative, but it wasn't actually a bad book, i just thought it needed some work. Overall, I think it wasn't bad. less

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