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Kept - I've Become His Dirty Little Secret (2013)

by Jamie Fuchs(Favorite Author)
3.39 of 5 Votes: 3
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Jamie Fuchs
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Kept
review 1: Kept - I've Become His Dirty Little SecretORThe Real Secret Is I Have The Emotional Depth of a PancakeThis is nothing but porn. It is better to sum up the plot not by what happens next but by what sex act happens next. It is unapologetic, raunchy, and frankly, kinda boring.I enjoy reading smut. There's a lot of interesting character development that happens around and in the bed. But absolutely none of that was present here. There's no emotional depth, no acknowledgement of what's going through a character's head or how unexpected threesomes and/or BDSM sex is affecting them. The main character sleeps with her best friend and I can't even tell if it's the first time she's been with a woman or not. There's not even any indication that she finds her friend physically att... moreractive! There is only the sex act on the page! The BDSM is pure fantasy BDSM. Consent is not discussed, safe words are not a thing, limits are not even an option. The main character is bullied into a threesome, a fact that is fine within the story, but as a reader I found rather unsettling that her friend would so blatantly use her and not even ASK. This is just porn, porn, porn. If you just want raunchy porn, have at it, but I like a little character to go with my smut, thanks.
review 2: My 5 star award is based on the following sex-o-meter rating system... as this book does NOT fall into the realms of my ordinary rating system1 star - dry as a desert2 star - ooh an itch3 star - oh dear wrong knickers on as feeling the moisture4 star - oh shit I need a private room5 star - too late I've had a wet dream experienceSo Jamie first thing I wondered when I came across your books, is do you have a lisp or partially tongue tied? I mean Fuchs right? Try saying fucks with a lisp and you do actually get Fuchs.... so therein I didn't take you seriously at all. But then I wonder am I meant to?So Rob (co-reviewer) will laugh his bloody socks of at this and do a childish ner ner ner dance. Jamie I absolutely cannot fault your deliverance of some right sexy shit you got going on in this book! Jesus woman off the charts at some points! It's not easy to pen dirty sexy scenes and have some semblance of a story that actually makes you want to read more but you certainly managed it!Right, I need a bloody cold shower - toodles. ☺ less
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jocie
I picked it up because it was free on Amazon. Wasn't overly impressed.
jnx
Too brief in parts of the story, is good one though
ThomasRudd
LOVED the book! The most sexiest thing i ever read.
superaceman22
It was good for what it was. A short story.
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