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Brie's First Day Of Submissive Training (2012)

by Red Phoenix(Favorite Author)

4.17 of 5 Votes: 1

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

Red Phoenix

series

Brie

review 1: This was part 1 of 9 in the story of Brie. There is a full-novel set of the same story, where you can read it all in one go. I guess the author wrote it in parts to publish bit by bit as it was formed over time, but 9-part series is quite a stretch.Part 1 was for free. That made sense: hook a new reader. I thought book 1 could include a bit more, but for what I read, it was tantalising. The narration flowed naturally. Brie was likeable and you could sense potential in her becoming a very expert submissive from the start.The anal “teasing” scene was well-written, it was consistent with Brie’s state of mind at the time and the gradual awakening and her discovery of what she’s capable of made a satisfying read.I would continue on to the next books; this holds promises... more.4 out of 5 stars in my book.
review 2: I'm still hovering over whether this was a 2 star, "Ok" by GoodReads standards, or 3 star story. Well written. Didn't notice any errors. So that isn't a concern. I suppose the 2 3 tilting balance is a mixture of oily creepiness about the situation, a feeling I'm not sure why I'd feel, plus a certain amount of boredom, plus an added flash of 'hmm, that part right there is somewhat interesting.'I don't know. A naive girl who doesn't really know herself or the world at large. Flushing with something or other when a man looks at her bent over and she notices. I suppose that, in and of itself, is one of my problems in general. Being a little too naive about the whole thing for me. Bah, I don't know.In the end I moved it up to 3 stars based on some other recent stories I've read and rated 2 stars. less

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