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Mary And The Bear [True Mates Series Book 2] (2008)

by Zena Wynn(Favorite Author)

4.05 of 5 Votes: 5

ISBN

0000152900 (ISBN13: 2940000152904)

languge

English

genre

Romance

publisher

Phaze

series

True Mates

review 1: I think other reviewers with similar rating sum up my thoughts. I am just going to point out that yet again the total lack of consistancy or at least logic in a story drives me nuts. It's a pet peeve and I've noticed that more and more authors in paranormal romance genre are doing it. It's what looks to me like an attempt to create/promote angst to keep an already weak story line moving along. For example: In this book Mary Elizabeth is told by Keisha about shifters and how her and Alex's relationship developed. Then she's told she's under protection of the pack as such she's being considered a part of it. As part of that she's invited to a mandatory SHIFTER PARTY Alex has called and would like her to attend. Mary Elizabeth was given fair warning that part of it was ... moreto introduce her and that the other shifter's would be "checking" her out to see if she either their compatible etc. So she goes and runs into Hugh there. Let me emphasize that it was clearly stated that it was a SHIFTER party so if I went and bumped into Hugh at a party for shifters I would likely assume that Hugh is a shifter. May not know what type but definitely he's likely a shifter. And there you go.... the rest of the story progresses as if Mary Elizabeth has absolutely no clue or even has any suspicion. Big hole in logic and thus ruins most of the story. Only reason I finish a book like that is because I always finish what I start reading. It's really too bad because I love reading these types of lighter funny paranormal romances when in the mood but I've been more an more disappointed with stories with such a blatant week story line.
review 2: Mary Elizabeth that girl has a temper on her, "aaargh! Are you big and stupid? You're getting the full three hundred next month. The rent is ridiculously low as it is. How do you keep this diner running, giving away money like you do?" Hugh the man has a jealous side, "when the man in front slid his hands up the side of her body to rest just below her breast, Hugh lost it. A growl broke loose as he stalked toward the dancing trio. Screw the plan!" Yea, he has jealousy issues, "And what the hell are you wearing? Where are the rest of your clothes? What, you advertising now? How much for an hour? Maybe we can find a deal." Hugh he loves it when he knows she's his, "you need to straighten up unless you want everyone out there to know what we were doing." Not that it would matter. His scent was all over her. The bear in him roared in approval. Mine!" Sometimes Mary Elizabeth does things intoxicated and well Hugh tries to do the right thing really he does, "Mary Elizabeth, stop. Let's discuss this. Baby, please. I don't think you know what you're doing." And you just have to appreciate a good a**, "hey! Stop that!" She smacked his butt, hard. Then, impressed with the shape and feel of it, cupped it with her hands, giving it a small squeeze. Nice. It was high and firm, not flat." less

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