NaPoWriMo 04/10/2017: Agapostemon

This month, I am collaborating with nonfiction author and photographer, Christy Peterson.  You are invited to write and submit a poem based on the photo in the comments.

Today I have two poem in zeno form. This is a form invented by J. Patrick Lewis and shared as a challenge at Today’s Little Ditty in 2014.  I love this form.

I wrote the first version and then played with the placing of the lines.

Agapostemon

they desire salt from our bodies
pollinators
green sweat
bees
shallow flower
pollen
spree
daily
glee

©2017, jone rush macculloch

Agapostemon

they desire salt from our bodies
pollinators
daily
glee
shallow flower
pollen
spree

green sweat

bees

©2017, jone rush macculloch

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